phantomstallion
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« Thread Started on Aug 27, 2006, 8:28pm » | |
(I'm planning when I get a job, I'm going to be an author and illistrator, most likely. And horses and wolves are my favorite topics! So here's a chapter of one of my stories I did on my writing computer program. Hope ya all like it! Comments are welcome in the form of replies, if you want to. I need a lot of practice to become an author!)
Sandy And The Secret Stallion
Afternoon light lit the beginning of a tiny foal's life. The foal was weak, but he climbed to his feet in minutes. He heard his mother's soft breathing and toppled into the straw in surprise. With a soft snort, he regained his wobbly grey feet. He stumbled his first few steps toward his mother. His mother lowered her nose to touch his nose, and the breathed in each other's scent, bonding for life. The mare licked the foal's nose, then the tiny foal bounced back. With a determined neigh, he nipped his mother's nose. But the gentle mannered mare stepped back only a step. The mare neighed softly at the foal and they touched noses again, and it was then that the buckskin mare named the fragile foal. Sinbad was his name, for his first small sin was early. He had nipped his mother, though it wasn't really a sin, in God's mind it was. A human set her jaw on the bars of the door, looking in. Her blue green eyes were intelligent and questioning. The girl whispered to the colt, "Sinbad. Just the perfect name for you, monster." The mare shared an almost knowing glance with the girl. Little did they know this mischevious foal would grow up to be a wild thing.
After his first two months, he was growing strong and steady, and he was almost as tall as the girl, Sandy. He was a great horse. --I'll edit it later for more!--
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